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26 Apr, 2007

Death and poetry

Posted by andrea tomkins in: Misc. life

These are a few of the things I want to do before I die:

- memorize a poem (I’m working on that)*
- travel the world until I feel like I’ve seen all there is to see
- experience different cities by living in each them for a month at a time
- travel across Canada by train
- snorkel along the Great Barrier Reef
- own a treehouse
- write a children’s book, and see it on the shelves of a bookstore
- enjoy a few grandchildren
- go white water rafting
- canoe camp: portage and all
- learn to kayak
- cover my walls with artwork
- have a forest and a fountain in my backyard

* I’ve been meaning to write about my Kubla Khan experience. I wrote about it awhile ago. And when I was telling Dani about it during our Blogging Chix night out, the quizzical look she gave me when I talked about it reminded me I needed to come back here and explain myself a little better. :)

Basically it comes down to self-improvement.

Before I set out on my media-free week I decided that this was something I wanted to do. I was reading about it on someone’s blog. This person decided to memorize a poem. It took him three days to do it the first time. But subsequent poems actually took less time to memorize. I thought that was pretty interesting. And wanted to try it out for myself.

My main motivation is this: I am in serious need of good brain exercise. Anything to stave off the dementia that is lurking around the corner. It is just me who is suffering from continued baby brain?  I am fairly certain that when each of the girls were born, a significant number of my brain cells were flushed out in the aftermath. For chrissakes I had those babies YEARS ago and have not regained any lost cells! My brain hasn’t been the same since. I keep calling my own kids by the wrong names. When I’m tired I talk like a crazy person – forgetting words or subconsciously substituting one word for another. (I can’t even think of an example. See? I’m becoming a walking vegetable.)

And thank god for spell check.

So yes, some people do the mental gymnastics of crossword puzzles. I’m memorizing a poem that was first introduced to me during my fourth year Romantic poetry class (that’s the ROMANTIC movement, not the other kind of romantic poetry that involves red roses and blue violets), Kubla Khan by Samuel Taylor Coleridge.  

I was originally going to make this into some kind of Blogger Poem Memorizing Contest, complete with funky little graphic you could take and paste into your respective blogs. But I assumed that no one would want to play. This is not exactly a “fun” sort of challenge. And besides, I was secretly afraid that I was seriously lacking in memorization skills and would suck at my own contest. And it’s kind of true. I haven’t gotten very far with my choice of poem, but then again I haven’t really had a lot of time to devote to it. I have the first part down pretty well. And I’m pretty happy with that.

Here, let me try to type it out and I’ll check to see if I get it right: [omg is this ever hard to do when kiddie cartoons are blaring in the background.]

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan a stately pleasure dome decree,
Were Alph the sacred river ran,
Through caverns measureless to man,
Down to a sunless sea.
So twice five miles of fertile ground,
with walls and towers were girdled round.
And there were gardens, bright with sinuous rills,
Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree
And here were forests as ancient as the hills,
Enfolding sunny spots of greenery.

But oh …  somethingorotherthisiswhereIstarttoforget

Uh. Like that. My breaks and punctuation are all wrong, but at least I can recite this part if asked. Only 43 more lines to go!

You know, the more I read this poem the more I love it, and the more I get from it. It is becoming part of me in some small way.

I have learned something about how I learn.

I don’t have a photographic memory. I don’t learn by repetitive reading. I think I’ve read the whole thing 200 times in its entirety. Mark found me a good BBC recording that I downloaded to my MP3 player. I listened to it at various times, walking to school, lying in bed etc. But repetitive listening hasn’t helped. What does work for me is committing it line by line, one line at a time.

What poem would you have chosen? How would you go about learning it?

I’m heading to Toronto this weekend. This might give me something to do it in the car on the way.

It makes me wonder if it’s not just my brain that’s getting soft. No one has to memorize anything in school anymore. It’s just not done anymore, is it?


13 Responses to "Death and poetry"

1 | liss76

April 26th, 2007 at 9:04 am

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Memorizing poems is something I’ve never found hard–I guess I should thank my Grade 2 teacher who made us all memorize “In Flanders Field”, telling us that if she ever bumped into us on the street as grown-ups she’d ask us to perform.

You know what? I bumped into her a couple years ago, and she did just that! :D

It’s something that came in handy in university–one of my profs (Comparative Religion / Asian Studies) had us memorize about 100 countries, all the provinces of China, about 150 cities, numerous rivers, geological features, etc for our final exam. I found that arranging them into a somewhat rythmic, somewhat rhyming order really helped!

2 | liss76

April 26th, 2007 at 9:09 am

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If memorizing doesn’t work out, though, you could always take up knitting–it’s reputed to help stave off dementia! ;)

3 | VickiZ

April 26th, 2007 at 12:08 pm

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Every summer, my sister, her husband and some subset of their six children come and visit me and my husband (no kids, two dogs) at our cottage for an extended weekend get-together. Two or three years ago, we planned a few months in advance to have a readings evening on the Saturday night. Everyone had to select a poem, piece of prose, song or something to present to the rest of the group.

I decided to memorize “Jabberwocky” by Lewis Carroll. I started working on the memorization task about three months before their visit. I worked on the first verse, and worked and worked and worked on it (talking aloud when I was doing housework or walking the dogs or whatever) … and then I would progress to the next verse. I worked pretty solidly at it, a bit a day, for that entire time.

The night of our readings, I handed out copies of the poem to my audience, so everyone could follow along *and* verify that I’d mastered it. And I did it. The fleeting gift of that evening is that my nieces and nephews got to enjoy a snippet of a quirky poetry class. The more enduring gift, of course, is the knowledge that their Aunt Vicki is one crazy chick.

4 | andrea

April 26th, 2007 at 12:15 pm

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Vicki – How fun! And that’s a challenging poem. Can you still remember it? (Here are the words if anyone is interested.)

5 | VickiZ

April 26th, 2007 at 12:38 pm

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Andrea, I can still rhyme off the first verse in my sleep. The rest I only remember in snippets. Of course, I sometimes roll out “Oh frabjous day! Calloo! Callay!” as an exclamation of joy for special occasions.

As an aside, an evening of readings is actually an intriguing (not to mention media lightened) way to enjoy a get together. We’ve done it with adult-only and adults-and-kids gatherings, and it is always vastly interesting to see what everyone selects and how they present their selections.

6 | Miss Vicky

April 26th, 2007 at 2:26 pm

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Confession: I love reciting poetry. Goes back to my childhood when I gleefully recited Dennis Lee poems to my grade 4 class (“Tricking” was my favourite). In high school there was actually a city-wide competition for poetry recitation as part of the debating contests. I blew ’em all away with The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock… and I have the cheesy trophy to prove it!

I also used to be able to recite the first page or so of my favourite novel. It’s been a while, though. Not sure how long I would get.

Maybe I could use a refresher. Afraid I need more irony than the romantics, though!

7 | liss76

April 26th, 2007 at 5:35 pm

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I think I’d have to go with something by Jonathan Swift–we still have diapers in our house and I’ve poop on the brain every day! :D

This one was always a favorite for a giggle:

http://www.ourcivilisation.com/smartboard/shop/swift/verse/chap2.htm

8 | liss76

April 26th, 2007 at 5:38 pm

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Oo

And who can forget “A Beautiful Young Nymph Going To Bed”?

http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/Texts/nymphbed.html

LOL Ah.. I loved my 18th Century Lit class.. nothing like scatalogical poetry being read in a wry tone of voice by a sweet little grandfatherly Welshman! :D

9 | Hillary

April 26th, 2007 at 7:14 pm

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When I was in grade 6 we did a unit on Medeaval times (and I STILL can’t spell that dang word!) and I really loved The Lady of Shallot. I had almost the whole thing memorized at one point. I still remember bits of it…

On either side the river lie
long fields of barley and of rye…
something something something
THe lady of Shallot.

ok. So only just tiny bits… D’oh.

Perhaps I should do that again…

10 | liss76

April 26th, 2007 at 7:25 pm

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Willows whiten, aspens quiver
Little breezes duck and shiver

Or something like that? I used to love that poem a lot–haven’t read it in awhile.. the reminder kind of makes me want to dig it out again. :)

11 | david

April 27th, 2007 at 8:28 am

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and now to take the comments down a notch
(and yes, I have my Rush tickets)
Xanadu Lyrics
» Rush
‘To seek the sacred river Alph
To walk the caves of ice
To break my fast on honeydew
And drink the milk of Paradise…’

I had heard the whispered tales of immortality
The deepest mystery
From an ancient book I took a clue
I scaled the frozen mountain tops of eastern lands unknown
Time and Man alone
Searching for the lost Xanadu

Xanadu…

To stand within the Pleasure Dome
Decreed by Kubla Khan
To taste anew the fruits of life
The last immortal man
To find the sacred river Alph
To walk the caves of ice
Oh, I will dine on honeydew
And drink the milk of Paradise

A thousand years have come and gone but time has passed me by
Stars stopped in the sky
Frozen in an everlasting view
Waiting for the world to end, weary of the night
Praying for the light
Prison of the lost
Xanadu

Xanadu…

Held within the Pleasure Dome
Decreed by Kubla Khan
To taste my bitter triumph
As a mad immortal man
Nevermore shall I return
Escape these caves of ice
For I have dined on honeydew
And drunk the milk of Paradise

12 | Mary G

April 28th, 2007 at 8:36 pm

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‘Xanadu’ is hard to memorize because of all the rhythm changes. I find Shakespeare easier because of the iambic pentameter and the fact that it was written to be spoken. What is challenging for me is learning a poem in another language — French, for example.
I hate to tell you this, but stuff I learned as a child and adolescent will come back to me fast and almost verbatim, but anything after that has to be gone over regularly or I start to lose it.
BTW, my almost four year old granddaughter loves ‘Jaberwocky’, which I had never learned. I have had to read it to her so often that I almost have it learned.
And I find that anything set to music I learn faster. Lorena McKennitt’s version of the Lady of Shallott (sp?) is really cool.

13 | Ryan

May 3rd, 2007 at 1:28 pm

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I had a friend who could rattle off the Cremation of Sam McGee at the drop of a hat. That’s always been a favourite.

In Chinese schools, all they do is memorise classic poems. If the teacher is busy and wants the class to be quiet, they will ask the kids to stand and recite the poem. I think it comes from the fact that learning Chinese is an exercise in memorization. Personally, I think a balance struck between memorisation and creation would be ideal, but it seems that we either go one way or another these days!

Oh, and as for the traveling goal? Once you start, you realize there is too much for one lifetime. Every traveler I’ve met just wants to see more. Good luck on the others, though!

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